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Cupcakes another Alt ending

Pinkie Pie stared into the mirror. She did a really good job, even keeping the eyelids. She winked; Dash winked back, Pinkie smiled.
But still, she was sad that her friend was now gone. It only lasted fifty minutes, not nearly as long as she wanted. She looked back at the cadaver handing there in the centre of the room, the last of its fluids draining in a pan. Yep, no more Rainbow Dash.


"Okay, so what now?" Pinkie Pie asked staring into the computer monitor, she didn't want all this hard work going to waist, and she needed an ending.

"How about…" the unkown figure pacing back and forth in the shadows pondering until an idea struck, "The body is in good tack, so you decided to rebuild her?"

Pinkie gasped, "That is a brilliant idea." She quickly started to type up the ending to the story, "And I consider doing the same with the others right?" She asked

"Now that will send shivers down spines." The other pony replied, Pinkie Pie giggled as she typed as fast as her hoofs could, within minutes it was completely finished.

"I don't know how this would of looked without your help Rainbow Dash" She smiled looking at the blue Pegasus next to her.

Rainbow Dash smiled with pride, strutting over to one side of the room, "Yeah, everything I take part in automatically becomes twenty percent cooler, I'm just that awesome." Pinkie Pie clopped her hoofs as Rainbow Dash bowed her head, acting like some stage performer.

"Well, the story is done; this is going to be one great prank." She said joyfully, jumping up and down on the spot. "Will send it to Twilight, and Applejack, and Rarity, but not Fluttershy because you know how she is with pranks but-"

Rainbow Dash interrupted shoving her hoof into Pinkie's mouth. "I have a much better idea." She said with a sly tone. "What about we let the whole world see our creation?"

Pinkie Pie's eyes lit up with excitement. "Yes, brilliant!" She yelled, jumping up and down like a pogo stick, and then she stopped suddenly. "Wait, people will know we wrote this, so it won't be as funny" Her excitement died down, but Rainbow Dash just smiled.

"Well, they won't know if you don't tell them." Pinkie Pie looked confused, what did Rainbow Dash mean, but the Pegasus just smiled. "Just make an account that doesn't even sound like you, you know, like if I made an account I would call it 'TheSlowOne' that's not me."

Pinkie Pie thought, it took her a while to understand what Rainbow Dash was talking about, finally the light bulb in her head flickered into life.

"Oh, I see" She smiled back; she went back to the computer, immediately she went right onto a story sharing site, typing in a username and was ready to roll.

"This is going to be the greatest prank ever." Pinkie Pie smiled as she posted their story onto the internet, for everyone to see.

:icontrollfaceplz: Trololololololololololololololololol

So this is another Alt ending to the MLP:FIM fanfic ‘Cupcakes’ and it turns out it was a prank done by none other than the two greatest pranksters ever, Pinkie Pie and Rainbow Dash.

They really should be ashamed of themselves, making members of 4Chan discussed just for one little prank.

If you haven’t read Cupcakes then you should read that before reading this…but you should also have a lot of guts and isn’t really easy to discuss…or a My Little Pony fan.

MLP:FIM :iconfyre-flye:

UPDATE: Hello Everyone, I just wish to imform you I had to change a spelling error and just tidy up this Fic, Plus, I wish to thank all the comments and faves I'm getting on this deviation, really I just did this as a late night joke because No one else did it like this, so once again thanks for all the comments and faves, Brohoofs to all :)
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HOLiC-ViRUS Featured By Owner Oct 23, 2012  Student Traditional Artist
Zeezeepearl Featured By Owner Aug 9, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
Rainbow Dash would... write about her own demise?
Lentertament Featured By Owner Aug 9, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
What a twist!
Zeezeepearl Featured By Owner Aug 12, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
Well, I suppose she's do it for trolling purposes....
AgelessAgera Featured By Owner Aug 20, 2011  Student General Artist
So that's how such a great fanfic began
WolfGirl0001 Featured By Owner Jul 22, 2011
You sir get a free internet :iconfreeinternetplz:
Lentertament Featured By Owner Aug 5, 2011  Hobbyist Writer
I'm So happy :iconiloveyouplz:
WolfGirl0001 Featured By Owner Aug 6, 2011
Lol no prob
EmeraldRay2000 Featured By Owner Jul 21, 2011  Hobbyist General Artist
DuplexFields Featured By Owner Jul 19, 2011  Hobbyist Writer
This is probably the best comedic alt ending I've read yet.
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